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Friday 10 February 2017

Juak the robot


Jack was sitn on the dump sad and he was looking for a friend but he could  not find a frend well he jasd staying there. He had a smile on his face on the plug and the tape on the robot face and he was sitn with the robot.


2 comments:

  1. Hi Mariko, I really like you picture. I think it really shows how sad and lonely the robot was. You have made a good start to writing this year Mariko. I look forward to reading more of your writing.
    From Miss Davis.

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  2. Morena Mariko,
    Thank you for sharing your story and picture on your blog. I watched the video of Jack on your class blog. You are so right, Jack was really sad and couldn't find a friend. I like how the tried to make his own friend. It was a nice happy ending when he did find a friend and they could hold hands. I wonder if you'll get to make a robot in your MakerSpace one day. That would be heaps of fun. Keep up the great writing and drawing.
    Ngā mihi
    Tania

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